Well to be perfectly honest...
I think that was a bad attempt to make people sad. If you want to do this please:
1) Learn to draw (I know it's suppose to be 'kid like' but come on).
2) Get a singer who can sing (lol).
3) Show more. It didn't make sense. And then "don't drink and drive please". Had nothing to do with the previous scenes.
Overall it deserves a 4 for a 'nice try'. It was a good attempt, but nothing special.